Nice to see your photo on the bio

My suggestions:

I think you should add one of your recipes in the intro and then something like: want more recipes like this? then go to YOURLINK. And then have 2-3 free recipes to give away for an email address.

Now English is not my Native tongue but the headline “Took a Look at my other lens” Shouldn’t it be Take a look at my other lenses ? I would change that headline to something link: More great Basic Cooking Lenses.

The yellow sticker: 3 ways to make toast, if you have enought characters add the link to your cookery book.

In stead of 2 yellow sticker you might choose a speech bubble or something else - for the variety.

I have rated your lens and lensrolled to my http://www.squidoo.com/casserole-recipes - it is getting a good amount of visitors, you might get some of it

Best
Susanne

go to your dashboard and click on profile tab and fill in all the information. great place to put your blog, too. Write a short paragraph about you. right now it says “this is my bio. i can finish it later”.

I think plural of lens is lenses. check module title for your featured lenses.

rather than “check out my blog”, use the RSS module and pop your blog in there. without saying “check out my blog” - just give blog title and something welcoming.
“check out” always sounds pushy to me.

pictures are great! esp the one of the small child! made me smile.

not “give me a chance” - sounds begging. you are providing a service. you are the one doing the giving.
use “Grandma Carol Can Help” or something like that. in fact, I might even remove that whole title, since the module before that has similar title. Try and see how that looks. no title on your book module–let it flow into that Learn Cooking Basics one.

Module title - featured lenses -
Easy Recipes for You or better yet, Cooking Lessons from Grandma Carol

Do you have more than one blog? again, just use RSS. and remove other mentions.

It’s really a super lens. I am lensrolling to my
http://www.squidoo.com/scramble-eggs
it’s an old one that still gets consistent traffic 20 or so visits a week. yours should do much better than that! I featured your Cooking Basics on that one.

hope this helps!