Comments on: Lens - The Health Benefits of Acai Berry http://www.squidrich.com/lens-the-health-benefits-of-acai-berry/ Karl Pemberton Thu, 29 Jul 2010 18:19:44 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: Mirjam http://www.squidrich.com/lens-the-health-benefits-of-acai-berry/comment-page-1/#comment-76 Mirjam Mon, 16 Mar 2009 13:43:42 +0000 http://www.squidrich.com/?p=139#comment-76 If it were my lens, I would put up some information to prevent people falling for the many Acai scams online, where they think they sign up for a free trial offer and actually sign up for a monthly shipment order that is hard to get out of. This would be a very helpful addition to the lens, plus it would make it safer seeing that "Acai berry" info on squidoo lenses appearantly is frowned upon ;) If it were my lens, I would put up some information to prevent people falling for the many Acai scams online, where they think they sign up for a free trial offer and actually sign up for a monthly shipment order that is hard to get out of.

This would be a very helpful addition to the lens, plus it would make it safer seeing that “Acai berry” info on squidoo lenses appearantly is frowned upon ;)

]]> By: Chhman http://www.squidrich.com/lens-the-health-benefits-of-acai-berry/comment-page-1/#comment-69 Chhman Sat, 14 Mar 2009 08:53:40 +0000 http://www.squidrich.com/?p=139#comment-69 I like the lens, but it does seem incomplete. The information is good. You need some other modules in there. I like the lens, but it does seem incomplete. The information is good. You need some other modules in there.

]]> By: Joan Adams http://www.squidrich.com/lens-the-health-benefits-of-acai-berry/comment-page-1/#comment-66 Joan Adams Fri, 13 Mar 2009 15:54:44 +0000 http://www.squidrich.com/?p=139#comment-66 Carol, just let me know when you "go green" or post the link here. we can still find it if we have the link. I love to do critiques - just know all my remarks are made in a spirit of love, not criticism. sometimes i get carried away. Ohme and I do so much of this for each other. so if i sound blunt, i don't mean to. looking forward to seeing your creation! Carol, just let me know when you “go green” or post the link here. we can still find it if we have the link. I love to do critiques - just know all my remarks are made in a spirit of love, not criticism. sometimes i get carried away. Ohme and I do so much of this for each other. so if i sound blunt, i don’t mean to. looking forward to seeing your creation!

]]> By: Carol Smith http://www.squidrich.com/lens-the-health-benefits-of-acai-berry/comment-page-1/#comment-65 Carol Smith Fri, 13 Mar 2009 15:28:53 +0000 http://www.squidrich.com/?p=139#comment-65 Information good but you need to expand the lens. Try to make additions at least every other day. Keep at it - it gets easier - it just takes time. Here's hoping Joan will critique my lens when it is featured. Great suggestions. Carol Smith aka Grandma Carol Information good but you need to expand the lens. Try to make additions at least every other day.

Keep at it - it gets easier - it just takes time.

Here’s hoping Joan will critique my lens when it is featured. Great suggestions.

Carol Smith aka Grandma Carol

]]> By: Acai Berry Benefits http://www.squidrich.com/lens-the-health-benefits-of-acai-berry/comment-page-1/#comment-62 Acai Berry Benefits Fri, 13 Mar 2009 02:40:16 +0000 http://www.squidrich.com/?p=139#comment-62 Thank you very much for the feedback. I'm pretty new to the ways of the squid, so the feedback is welcome and very helpful. I'll make the changes later this evening. Thank you very much for the feedback. I’m pretty new to the ways of the squid, so the feedback is welcome and very helpful. I’ll make the changes later this evening.

]]> By: Joan Adams http://www.squidrich.com/lens-the-health-benefits-of-acai-berry/comment-page-1/#comment-42 Joan Adams Thu, 12 Mar 2009 17:20:23 +0000 http://www.squidrich.com/?p=139#comment-42 Definitely put a picture of yourself in the bio section. Most serious lensmasters will not comment or rate a lens with the "orange guy" in the bio. Also be sure to read this lens from Megan Casey. You will probably be okay re the weight loss, but it is a very fine line, and again, will cost you in Squidoo comments and visitors if they feel you are selling a weight loss product. http://www.squidoo.com/squiddont Change the title of the guest book. Default module titles will keep you out of some of the directories, like Isle of Squid - and might seriously hurt your chances of the lens qualifying for Giant Squid. I do love the colorful pictures. and I think you need a conversation -- a twitter storm or a debate just to get folks involved. Note: I read once that you should never have a screen full of just text. Break up that long module titled "what makes acai berries so healthful?" wonder if that long list could be 2 columns somehow? I cannot help with that, but there has to be a way to do it. add a picture to that last text module. add an amazon book or two on the subject of natural health or Acai Berry. whew! I got carried away! My sister (Ohme on Squidoo) and I critique this way for each other constantly - so please do not be offended. one more thing - I open my comments to all visitors - not just Squidoo-ers. I get some great comments that way. and if not, you can always delete them. I think I have deleted 3 comments in my year with Squidoo. Definitely put a picture of yourself in the bio section. Most serious lensmasters will not comment or rate a lens with the “orange guy” in the bio.

Also be sure to read this lens from Megan Casey. You will probably be okay re the weight loss, but it is a very fine line, and again, will cost you in Squidoo comments and visitors if they feel you are selling a weight loss product.
http://www.squidoo.com/squiddont

Change the title of the guest book. Default module titles will keep you out of some of the directories, like Isle of Squid - and might seriously hurt your chances of the lens qualifying for Giant Squid.

I do love the colorful pictures. and I think you need a conversation — a twitter storm or a debate just to get folks involved.

Note: I read once that you should never have a screen full of just text. Break up that long module titled “what makes acai berries so healthful?” wonder if that long list could be 2 columns somehow? I cannot help with that, but there has to be a way to do it.

add a picture to that last text module.

add an amazon book or two on the subject of natural health or Acai Berry.

whew! I got carried away! My sister (Ohme on Squidoo) and I critique this way for each other constantly - so please do not be offended.

one more thing - I open my comments to all visitors - not just Squidoo-ers. I get some great comments that way. and if not, you can always delete them. I think I have deleted 3 comments in my year with Squidoo.

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